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    dots Submission Name: Darkness vs Lightdots
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    Author: extrEMO
    ASL Info:    18. Ima guy. NC
    Elite Ratio:    2.22 - 77/57/29
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 689
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsDarkness vs Lightdots
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    People say that light is safer
    Because you can see whats coming.
    The thing is
    Whats coming can see you
    Why would you hide
    Where you can be seen?

    I say darkness is safer
    It envelopes you
    Hiding you in itself
    As if it wants to help
    Your attacker wont be seen
    And neither will you




    Submitted on 2009-11-05 08:17:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      nice poem on darkness vs light thats exactly the way it is
    | Posted on 2009-12-30 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea i thought of that but i thought "this is poetry... [censored] it"
    | Posted on 2009-11-05 00:00:00 | by extrEMO | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice attempt David ( A bit cranky cause I'm sick and the only one getting up off my ass at the house. . . . ) But you also have to think about this in a purely logical way. Nocturnal creatures, hunting, death, surprise all happens in the dark. A good idea, and I really liked it despite my critic . . . . Sorry I'm pissy >:|
    | Posted on 2009-11-05 00:00:00 | by Scaredheart | [ Reply to This ]


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