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    dots Submission Name: Honey...it's not cutedots
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    Author: bloddyrazorgirl
    ASL Info:    18/f/az
    Elite Ratio:    1.32 - 37/34/40
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Rant/Misc
    Total Views: 23
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 468



    Description:
       i just got mad...im at school and this girl wears shirts that show her bra. maybe i'm just too modeast idk...


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    dotsHoney...it's not cutedots
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    honey it's not cute to wear shirts that just happen to show that little blue bow on your bra. It's actually called trashy, whorish, slutty. Sure it gets the boys to drool but really is that the kind of attention you want? Do you want to be a sex object? To be played with then tossed aside. Because that's what's going to happen. You're broadcasting yourself as easy. And it's really quite sad. here's a tip, put some clothes on!!!!!




    Submitted on 2009-11-05 13:34:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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