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    Author: Ceasing End
    ASL Info:    15/girl/well... somewhere
    Elite Ratio:    3.25 - 17/23/20
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 20
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1286



    Description:
       Again, this could mean anything. I will leave it to you to interpret in any way you see fit. This is just a poem composed on the spur of the moment.
    You are welcome to post whatever you like, be it writing advice, a review, or anything - so long as it is not off topic >.<


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    The roaring of the stormy ocean echoes in my mind
    Take a single step forwards: leave them all behind
    I feel the wet shingle shift slightly beneath my feet
    Listen to the whirling winds: now, you are complete
    I taste the tang of salt carried in the sea air
    Now reach for those rocks and feel it in your hair!
    I feel the greasy slime of seaweed beneath my hands
    Boost yourself up and gaze upon this land
    I see the glistening, glittering, cobalt blue sea
    Carry on up: you won't fall, I guarantee
    The rough blades of seagrass try to warn me back
    Ignore them, continue, you're staring to get off track
    With no small effort I clamber to the peak
    Look around - do you see what you seek?
    I creep to the edge, look around, and back I lunge
    Now you have reached my summit, I implore you, Take the plunge.




    Submitted on 2009-11-05 14:25:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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