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    Author: erinthereader
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 866
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Description:
       a young gril, by the name of vicki, finds she has powers at a young age. she has no idea how she can control these powers, so she has to lie to her friends and family when strange this happen. then, she meets a young boy named james, around her age and falls for him right when she looks at him. a dark force is after vicki's powers and will stop at nothing to get them.what will happen to vicki and james? and what will the dark force do if he gets vicki's powers?


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    As I sit down in my living room getting ready to read a book, the doorbell rings, loud and clear, demanding to be answer. I put my book down angrily and walked to the front door, wondering who it could be, though having a good idea who. As I come up to the door, I see the darkness coming from the person behind it. It was like a cold air going through me. I shivered and sighed. No matter how many times I see him, I never will get use to it.
    I open the door and there he is. He is tall and has black hair that is pulled back as if combed. He has on a black sweater open over a black t-shirt and jeans. His eyes were black, like a black hole. Every time I look into them, I have the strange feeling that I’m floating in darkness, enable to move. Enable to breath.
    He smiles with sweetness and bitterness, like he knows I am slightly afraid of him. I smile my bittersweet half-smile and he chuckles under his breath. I step aside so he can come in, half wanting to slam the door shut and run.
    There was something about him that was different today. I couldn’t put my finger on it. So I shrugged it off, thinking he will get to it in his own time. I follow him into the living room and sit down in the seat I was sitting in be for he came. I watch him walk over to the seat across from me. There was definitely something he wanted to tell me.
    I waited, my eyes locked on his.
    “I came to tell you what I learned about your recently discover powers” he spoke indifferently.
    I stare at him in shock. I was not expecting this. He smiled like he knew what I was thinking.
    “What?” was all I could get past my closed throat. He laughed that mean and dark laugh.
    “I found out more about you powers”, he said impatiently. I finally found my voice.
    “But I thought you promised to let it drop”, I whispered (it was all I could manage at the moment).
    “What I said was that I would not mention it when your mother was around”, he stated, waving an impatient hand in the air.
    “Oh”, I said lamely. Ok, I set myself up for that in a desperate but lame attempt to avoid the subject. Well, this means he must know what my powers are. I wanted to avoid this subject but now that it up it looks like I’m going to have to talk about it and with the last person I would want to talk to.
    “What did you find out?” I asked, now truly curious. My powers make them selves know when I am upset or mad and when I am really concentrating. I tried not to concentrate too hard on him.
    “It turns out you are a telepath and a psychic. You are, also, a spell caster.” He said with an evil grin. I started at him, speechless. I had no idea how I liked being a telepath. A psychic, I was not sure. A spell caster, I don’t mind.
    “Ok, thanks. Is there anything else?” I asked and wondered if I really wanted to know.
    “Well…… there is another thing I should tell you. There is also a necromancer gene in your family. On your fathers side”, he said with watchful eyes. I looked away.
    I had to think this through. So, there is a necromancer gene in my family. Great. I have been told that a necromancer sees ghosts. But I can’t be one; I haven’t seen any ghosts yet.
    So, I might start seeing ghosts soon. Oh, great. Just perfect. At lest I got a warning, because if I didn’t, then I was sure that I would go crazy thinking that I was insane.
    This day could not get any worse.
    “Do you know, if the gene will kick in, how long until then?” I asked, wondering if he knew.
    “Sadly, no”, he said. I could feel his gaze on my face. I had not looked up yet. Then I herd the most dreadful sound in the world, my mother’s car in the driveway. I looked up at him. He was smiling. I sighed.
    I heard the click of the key in the lock and the door opened.
    “Vicki?” I heard my mom say.
    “I’m in the living room”, I yell back. Then I say, sarcastically,” You’ll never guess who’s here.”
    “Hello, miss”, he said.
    My mom rounded the corner as she said,”hey, I didn’t think you’d be here. Would you like to stay for supper?”
    “No, thank you. I was just leaving,” he said as he stood up.
    I looked out the window and watched him leave with relief, but knew that I would see him again soon. I followed my mom into the kitchen, knowing that this is only the beginning.






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