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    dots Submission Name: Alonedots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2.37 - 46/71/89
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 48
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 615



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    dotsAlonedots
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    I've come to terms with the fact
    That I may be alone for a while.
    I may even begin to hurt deeply,
    And let myself turn into something vile.

    I hate the idea of being lonely,
    But at last I must accept it.
    I do not want to do so,
    But I put myself in a pit.

    I know not what I will do,
    Or even who I may meet.
    But I find that someone loving me,
    Is an un-accomplished feet.

    Maybe I'm better left alone,
    But for how long could it last?
    I know not how long,
    But its time to move past.




    Submitted on 2009-11-05 17:12:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I added this one as one of my favs. I adored it. the beginning left such a good impression on me. I loved it.
    -Rachel:)
    | Posted on 2009-11-10 00:00:00 | by PopRocksRae | [ Reply to This ]


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