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    dots Submission Name: All The Dramadots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 587
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAll The Dramadots
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    Drama, Drama, Drama is all I see and hear
    Why does all this drama, have to be so near?
    I have so many problems, to deal with in my own life
    All the extra problems, cause me extra strife

    Iím still trying to move on, from my latest blow
    If someone tries to talk to me, how am I to know?
    My mind is way too busy, dealing with my stress
    I sure do wish that all of this, in my mind I could repress

    But I canít repress it, so I need to try to cope
    Everything around me, doesnít give me much hope
    I know Iím not the only one, with problems in my brain
    But if I canít deal with mine, how can I ease your pain?

    All the stress is getting to me, I canít move around
    With all the BS going on itís damn hard to rebound
    Iím getting really tired, of trying to win the fight
    But in all honesty, Iím trying to do whatís right

    Every time I turn around, another problem arises
    I should be expecting it; there should be no surprises
    But it always seems to sneak in, and catch me unaware
    Iím sorry if you need to talk, I have no feelings to spare

    My feelings they have died, all along the road
    But if you want you can still, sit down and unload
    I wish that all these problems, would slip into the past
    If that is going to happen, it had better happen fast,

    I just donít understand, all the drama people invoke
    More and more problems they seem to try to provoke
    My blood pressure goes up, and stays up for a while
    Dealing with these problems, I find it hard to smile

    Itís hard to be in a good mood, when everything is broke
    Most of all you come to realize, life is one big joke
    This joke is being played, for someoneís amusement
    I donít think itís funny at all dealing with the torment

    But life goes on and on and on, without further ado
    And why the drama continues to build, no one has a clue
    But it builds and piles some more stuff on my chest
    I have so much already there, I canít get any rest

    It keeps me awake through the night, thinking of a plan
    I bust my ass to do whatís right, to help my fellow man
    Because I know he needs some help, just to make it through
    I give a hand when I donít have one, they donít have a clue

    All my problems are all mine; they are my cross to bear
    I tried to talk about them, no one seemed to care
    So I keep them to myself, all buried up inside me
    One by one I will deal with them, and then I will be free

    All the drama slows me down, from reaching my goal
    In the future all that slowed me will pay a heavy toll
    They didnít care that I was hurting, by myself, all alone
    That they had no time for me; it chills me to the bone

    Now that I have fixed mine, and they are over and through
    You should wonder if Iíll be there, next time you are blue
    But you know I will be there, to help you out again
    But there will be some times, when we cannot win.




    Submitted on 2009-11-05 18:54:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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