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It seems to me Iíll never win
I wonder if I should just give in
Give in to the urges from deep inside
Or maybe I should just run and hide
I canít give in and I canít hide away
But I know for sure here I canít stay
Where I am now is Hell on earth
Was this the real reason for my birth?
For some reason I was expecting more
Than watching my life walk out that door
But out it went, itís gone forever
I want it back but you say never
Iíll never forget what you have done
Especially saying that I was the one
When it was you screwing around
And running our marriage into the ground
All the while I stayed true
And I believed the same for you
But you decided you wanted more
So you turned yourself into a whore
Those are your words from the past
When you said that we would last
Who knew that you would lie and cheat?
Itís not really such an amazing feat
People that do that lose in the end
Leaving behind wounds to tend
The wounds you leave are deep and wide
No one sees them they are on the inside
I wish that they had a pill to make feelings go away
But alas they donít so I guess theyíll stay
Like a knife they cut deep into my soul
Whether they stay or go I have no control
I try to move on get on with my life
Iím tired of all the misery and strife
One way or another this has to end
Maybe the solution lies around the bend
So Iíll hang on at least for another day
Maybe tomorrow will be different and I will want to stay
Submitted on 2009-11-05 18:57:49
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