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Submission Name:
A New Life
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Author:
Survivor_Dean
ASL Info:
42/M/Minnesota
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319
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Poetry/Misc
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A New Life
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I wake in the morning and rise out of bed
All kinds of thoughts running through my head
I know I hate the way things are and I need a change
Maybe today a better future I can help arrange
I don’t know how or where to start to begin anew
There must be someone for me I just don’t know who
I really hate to be alone; it makes me want to scream
I don’t know if this is real or just a real bad dream
I am awake so this must be real, I detest the thought
That my life can be this bad makes me feel distraught
I hope it gets better soon and someone comes along
Because being alone, to me, just feels so damn wrong
I want to share my life with someone that loves me
I know I’ll love her back just you wait and see
I just want to be happy and shed no more tears
I just want to feel loved for the rest of my years
I wish I knew just where to look to find my one true love
When I find her I will treat her like a gift from up above
I will stand by her through good times and through bad
And that we’re together we will both be glad
If there is some sort of problem we will talk it out
There will be no reason to have to scream and shout
We’ll pay no attention to what other people say
There will be no reason for us to have to stray
You will always stand by me right until the end
Because in all reality you’ll be my best friend
We’ll share everything, the laughter and the tears
There will be plenty of love to last through all the years
Submitted on 2009-11-05 19:01:19
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this poem is lovely. Its real and I can feel it.
| Posted on 2009-11-05 00:00:00 | by
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