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A New Life
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A New Life
I wake in the morning and rise out of bed
All kinds of thoughts running through my head
I know I hate the way things are and I need a change
Maybe today a better future I can help arrange
I donít know how or where to start to begin anew
There must be someone for me I just donít know who
I really hate to be alone; it makes me want to scream
I donít know if this is real or just a real bad dream
I am awake so this must be real, I detest the thought
That my life can be this bad makes me feel distraught
I hope it gets better soon and someone comes along
Because being alone, to me, just feels so damn wrong
I want to share my life with someone that loves me
I know Iíll love her back just you wait and see
I just want to be happy and shed no more tears
I just want to feel loved for the rest of my years
I wish I knew just where to look to find my one true love
When I find her I will treat her like a gift from up above
I will stand by her through good times and through bad
And that weíre together we will both be glad
If there is some sort of problem we will talk it out
There will be no reason to have to scream and shout
Weíll pay no attention to what other people say
There will be no reason for us to have to stray
You will always stand by me right until the end
Because in all reality youíll be my best friend
Weíll share everything, the laughter and the tears
There will be plenty of love to last through all the years
Submitted on 2009-11-05 19:01:19
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this poem is lovely. Its real and I can feel it.
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