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    dots Submission Name: What Love Isdots

    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 181
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 734
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsWhat Love Isdots

    Love is not only a feeling; itís a choice you make
    It happens when you decide, all others to forsake
    For it to grow it needs to be nurtured, groomed and tended
    Or over the course of time, it surely will be ended
    If you really watch it, and it starts to fade
    It is easily recaptured, with more attention paid
    Love can very easily, last for many years
    Through all of the pain, and even through the tears
    Almost all the time, it should last a lifetime long
    Usually if it doesnít, somethingís seriously wrong
    It usually happens, when one person doesnít even try
    And the other person is left, just wondering why
    Why didnít it last, when they did whatever they could?
    It didnít matter; someone else didnít do what they should
    If they both agreed to, they could try again
    If they tried real hard, then both of them would win
    The only loser in this, is the one that didnít even try
    But the one that did their best, will be the one to cry

    Submitted on 2009-11-05 19:03:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2009-11-09 00:00:00 | by franki jorge | [ Reply to This ]
      wonderful concept, great wording. Very nice work :). Very relatable because almost everyones been there.
    | Posted on 2009-11-08 00:00:00 | by sugar_sweet | [ Reply to This ]

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