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    dots Submission Name: Strangerdots
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    Author: brokenbylove
    ASL Info:    23/m/australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.37 - 62/250/224
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 29
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 503



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    dotsStrangerdots
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    I was looking for you but I didn't know
    You were a new face In this place
    You were the stranger 
    Hidden in front of me
    I'm always so jaded so faded
    Your eyes made me come alive
    Your smile lights up my life
    Feels like I have known you forever
    I'm not alone cause you are here
    Soothing my fears
    Drying my tears
    You were the new face in my life
    All I had was strife
    Once again I'm alive 




    Submitted on 2009-11-06 04:13:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      beautiful concept, I liked it. Good work
    | Posted on 2009-11-08 00:00:00 | by sugar_sweet | [ Reply to This ]


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