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Love me or leave me

Author: Lynda
ASL Info:    26/F
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Love me or leave me

There are so many people I like more than you. But I love you.
There's the guy I'm seeing now, who I'm seeing out of convenience because you're not here. I don't love him.
There's the guy at work who I've had a crush on for months who I love to hang out with. But he's not you.
There's the ex boyfriend who still calls to check up on me. I never loved him.
Then there's you. You claim you don't love me, but you call everyday. It kills me every time that you call, because you consistently hurt me with just a hello.
Love me or leave me.

Submitted on 2009-11-06 09:32:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Man how much does this feeling suck. Up untill recently I was in a situation exactly like this.

I really like the way you have written it esspecially the 3rd to the 8th line. Its sooo true the subsitution of one person for another but never forfilling enough.

Great piece.
| Posted on 2009-11-09 00:00:00 | by Mooncatcher | [ Reply to This ]

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