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    dots Submission Name: Heaven's Not Enoughdots
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    Author: abbyblack
    ASL Info:    14/f/Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    0.93 - 0/0/2
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 23
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 571



    Description:
       A poem I wrote while listening to Heaven's Not Enough from the anime Wolf's Rain.
    I do not take credit for this because I used a few lines from the song, but a few ARE my own..


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    dotsHeaven's Not Enoughdots
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    Heaven's not enough
    If you get there and it's just
    Another Place

    And Heaven's Not enough
    If you get Lost along the way

    Heaven's not Enough If I get there and
    Don't remeber You

    And it Loses you
    In a cloud
    And nothing is ever as it seems

    I would fly away
    To a Higher Place
    But it seems I'll
    Never get there

    If I could love
    If I could live
    I would tell Heaven goodbye
    And run to You




    Submitted on 2009-11-06 11:29:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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