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    dots Submission Name: Age After The Apocalypse.dots
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    Author: blackwolfleader
    ASL Info:    15, female
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 0/2/17
    Words: 1759
    Class/Type: Story/Longing
    Total Views: 17
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    Bytes: 9108



    Description:
       This is just the first chapter I will post more of it as I'm done.

    Also I'm not giving a description because whats going on is a mystery,
    So enjoy.


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    dotsAge After The Apocalypse.dots
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    Chapter 1:Day 1, What happened!?



    “ I can’t see it, what happened to the sky? Its gone.... A better question is where am I
    who am I? I remember... Seeing my friends face full of fear, my brother smiling,
    my dad.... and her blood every where.... This place its where I used to life yet I
    don’t recognize any of it. Its all dead... Their all dead, this place used to be so lively
    but now every one’s dead. The look on their faces as if they died screaming,
    and my family ..... I guess I should of known instead of looking, they were
    dead to their faces the same as the rest. But what’s funny is I wanted to be sad I wanted
    to cry but I couldn’t it was just a funny feeling, like my gut was telling me to keep going
    don’t stay here. I thought I mite go see my friend but I’m pretty sure I knew what happened to her, matter of fact I remember watching her die. But everything after
    thats a blur. All I remember is walking for such a long time bleeding in pain yet not in pain feeling nothing, feeling one thing and one thing only hungry.... But not a normal
    hungry it went deeper than that. So all I can do is walk now walk and hope to find
    something in all this ruble. I just wish I could see the moon and the stars instead of such
    dark clouds, I wonder if their warning me... Warning me to stay away, but from what I
    wonder maybe the truth... Who knows.”





    Day 2: Who am I, What is my name, What have you done to me!?

    I found a place with people its strange though all they do is stare at me as if I’m some
    psycho punk. But I’m pretty sure I’m not, I wish I knew what was going on.

    I walked around a corner and was surrounded by three intimidating guys,
    I wasn’t scared though. One of them that looked to be the leader had red hair and glowing eyes, the other two wore black cloaks.

    “Who are you and what do you want!” I yelled.

    “You still don’t know what you are or what happened do you?”
    The leader asked.

    “You didn’t answer my question!” I yelled again.

    “Your eyes they seem to say yes you still don’t know, you still think your human.”
    He said.

    He walked toward me his words echoing in my head. What did he mean I’m not human?
    He stopped in front of me starring down at me as if I were a child, but I kinda
    felt like a child, all of a sudden my emotions just for a split second traveled back
    to me and I felt scared, alone, and sad. It hurt those emotions coming back
    it hurt like I was being stabbed a thousand times over. But that pain went away so quickly I don’t think any one noticed what happened.

    “Alright if your so smart explain to me what happened?!” I demanded.

    “Yes of course, but first I will introduce me and my comrades I am Element, he is time,
    and he is gravity. We were named after the powers we were given when we were reborn. We are Elites and so are you we were created to be super soldiers to fight
    for these humans. Yet when we were created they turned against each other
    and bombed each others countries, that is what happened 2 months ago.
    But as of the bombing our leaders The Council of Sacrifice have decide that we
    the Elites will not work for humanity we will destroy it instead and our creator who
    found out how to make super soldiers since 2000 has decide to join us in destroying humanity. Now will you join us, Red Moon?” Element put his hand out in a graceful manner inviting me as an Elite.

    My names not Red Moon I know it isn’t , but I don’t remember what it is why can’t I remember? My name my life.... I can remember my brother his smile.
    I can remember my mom and her nagging and memory of bad things I did.
    I can remember my dad and him turning his back on me and my brother.
    I can remember my friends and their energeticness, their smiles them being there
    for me when I needed them, and her dyeing blood on my face her lying there and that promise we made. So I do remember I just don’t remember my name.

    “I will protect humanity, because of a promise I made to protect the innocent and thats what I’m going to do! I won’t forget my family my friends my life, I will fight on and protect. That is my promise and I will keep it!” I yelled.

    Element slowly put his hand down and approached even closer to me.
    “You have gracefully declined my offer, but...”
    Element lifted his hand and suddenly started to strangle me, I couldn’t breath.
    “The council told me I had two choice either invite you or kill you.”
    His grip started to get tighter and tighter.

    I need to do something or he’ll kill me..... I have to find my power.
    I can feel something ..... Right this mite sound lame but I’ve got to do something.

    “Red Moon, chaos blast!” A red beam came out of my hand, Element was thrown
    back and hit a concrete wall the other two in cloaks stared at me, but some how
    just by reflex a jumped back and ran. But I jumped so high I landed on the roof of a building next to me and I jumped from building to building for a second I felt like Spiderman.

    “Aaaahhhh!” I tripped and landed in a trash can I couldn’t move my leg it was twisted backwards and in great pain, so I decided to try and get some sleep.

    When I woke up that next morning the coast was clear and it was raining, my leg was still in pain but I had to get up I hadn’t eaten in a long time and my gut felt funny.
    I tried to move but my leg wouldn’t budge, I knew what I needed to do and I also knew it would hurt.

    “AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!” I twisted my leg back in place it still hurt but I could move it now, so I took a red cloak I found in the trash and walked with a limp and a stick.

    The rain calmed and soothed my nerves, it also reminded me... where I used to life it rained allot thinking of that made me cry yet not feel sorrow. I looked down at a puddle,
    I was stunned at what I saw looking back at me, I kneeled down. My hair was white,
    my eyes were red and my tears were blood. My face ,my emotions, my name
    they were all gone, even my body is different I’m ten times stronger than I used to be.
    Matter of fact my leg feels better all ready, I moved my leg around the pain was gone it healed in that small amount of time.

    “My body these powers what am I?” I whispered.

    A man walked up beside me and put a gun to my head and said,
    “ Your an Elite and I’m a hunter.... “ The man got ready to pull the trigger but stopped.

    “Why ... Why did you stop?” I asked.

    “I can see it in your eyes....” He said.

    “See what?” I was confused this man Hunter seemed emotional like he wasn’t here to kill me but to look for something.... But what?

    “Hope, a future. You carry something deep within you, a fight for a dream a promise,
    humanity. You have quite the destiny and adventure ahead. A travel most will not walk.”
    The Hunter put his gun away.
    “ Don’t go it alone. Also you mite want to know there are other hunters out there, and there looking for you.... Red Moon.” The man walked away and disappeared into the moving sand of the desert out side of the city.

    I however stayed where I was feeling the rain mix on my face with my tears the, blood from my eyes draining down my face. What was I really and why was so many people after me and why was I left alone in this desert place a land with no hope. Why was I left alone.

    “Why!?” I yelled hoping for an answer.


    I fell to my back looking at the sky letting the rain fill my eyes and wash away the blood.
    I then closed my eyes and begged for sleep, I got my wish but instead of a peaceful quite slumber I had a nightmare filled tormented toss and turn rest.

    The nightmares were horrible, I was running from those men and when I turned around I saw my brother protecting me. I saw him ripped to shreds by those men,
    and I saw her face the person who made me like this a monster, she was poking needles into me like a science project. I made up my mind right there I would travel to find this women and pay her back for the torment she caused me.

    Day 4-8: My journey for revenge.

    I snooped around a little bit before I headed out to take my revenge. Some how I could smell her the stench of creation and twistedness, so I followed my nose. Also my snooping from earlier got me a truck, its in bad shape but it still works and double
    socoms. Both of these will defiantly help me to accomplish my goals.




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