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    dots Submission Name: Our W.A.R (We Are Ready)dots
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    Author: blackwolfleader
    ASL Info:    15, female
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 0/2/17
    Words: 1182
    Class/Type: Story/Serious
    Total Views: 24
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    Description:
       Its only the first chapter but I will post more as I'm done.

    Green’s just a color right.... wrong. Green’s are a race of people with powers and abilities and spirit guardians or animal friends.


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    dotsOur W.A.R (We Are Ready)dots
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    Chapter 1: Are we ready?


    “Green’s just a color right.... wrong. Green’s are a race of people with powers and abilities and spirit guardians or animal friends. In 1990 scientists discovered Green’s
    and coded them as a threat to American government. So they decided at the age of 15
    or high school all Green’s would be sent to the army to be point men or basically walk out in front of the enemy and get shot, so boot camp or prison is where you’ll find Green’s. Also were called Green’s because when we are born our blood is tested
    if we are blue we’ll lead a normal life if were Green were born prisoners.
    And if were light green were weak if were yellow green were pretty powerful,
    but the most rare green which only four is known to exist is dark green.
    If you ask normal people greens don’t exist, only high ranking military officers
    know about greens. How do I know you ask well I hacked into a military grade
    terminal and found out I myself are a dark green. But the other day my mom got a letter
    and well here I am prison or line up.” A young girl described her situation in her head.

    “Here are the three rules of this camp, 1:there is no love, 2: there is no friendship,
    and 3: There Are No Powers! Do I make myself clear?” A general shouted and spat
    commands at us.

    “Yes Sir!” Every shouted back except for the young girl.

    “Also you will work hard in your normal studies as well as training, no rebelling or acting
    like teenagers!” He spat again but this time at a young girl shaking.
    “You will stop shaking maggot!” He shouted at her.

    The other young girl stepped out of line to protect the shaking girl.
    “Hey Sir! Your acting like a Jack *** Sir! And I can’t stand for that sir!”
    She Shouted.

    The general came up to her and asked.
    “What did you say maggot!”

    “I said your being a Jack ***, Sir!” She whispered to him.

    “Your going to regret that.” The general took the gun from his holster and beat the girl nearly to death with the back of it. After he was done he dismissed every one else
    and left her there coughing up her own blood and choking on it.






    The other girl with glasses who was shaking ran up to her and started to heal her wounds with a power.
    “Thank you so much..... I really appreciate it.” She said.

    “No problem it’s what I do best.... I like taking the spot light I can’t stand not be the center of attention.... cough.” Blood came out of her mouth as the other girl healed her.

    “No thats not it at all you saved me your like a hero or something... Oh by the way my names Gena whats yours?” She asked.

    “Natalia ..... Natalia Wolf, but please call me Nat all my friends do. Oh and I’m no hero
    just your average every day upstager as they say.” She replied.

    “No way! Your my hero.” Gena continued to heal Nat with her powers.

    Nat tried to get up but fell back down,” Oh **** that hurts!” She yelled.

    “No stop I’m not done yet!” Gena yelled back.

    Nat tried to get up again but this time a hand pushed her back down.
    “You should listen to her she’s a healer.”

    “Mister David!” Gena yelled in surprise.

    Nat turned to see a strapping man with light brown hair and dark green eyes looking back at her with a wishful look, almost as if without asking he was asking her for something, but there was one more thing she sensed something from him like flowing water of a strong river, she sensed power and strength flowing from him it was almost
    overwhelming.

    “Who are you?” Nat asked.

    “Mister David, but I would appreciate it if you called me David.”
    He bowed.

    Wow he’s corny but interesting I think I’ll stay close to him, Nat thought.

    “I find you interesting too Miss Wolf.” David replied.

    “Oh so you can read minds.” Said Nat.

    “No just eyes.” David replied.

    “Mmmm, oh by the way call me Nat not Miss Wolf okay Dave.” Said Nat trying to get back up.

    “Right of course, here let me help you.” David put his arm around Nat and helped her up and walk.

    “Here I’ll help to.” Gena also put her arm around Nat and they started to walk.

    As they walked through the base all of the young recruits and soldiers watched and starred as she went by, some with a scarred face some with a hopeful face.
    But as Nat saw all of those faces, so many hurt and scared so many who had a future before coming to this place

    “I may not have had a future but they did, I will not forgive the person responsible for this. I promise I will set every one free again so their lives aren’t wasted here in this hell
    hole.” Whispered Nat.

    “I’ll help you keep that promise Miss Wolf.... I mean Nat.” Said David whispering to Nat.

    “I will to.” Said Gena.

    “Great looks like I’ve already got a team.” Said Nat smiling.

    “Don’t worry theirs more than just us, just wait a little while longing we are not one we are many so many.” Whispered David.

    “Okay... Augh.” Nat blacked out after that.

    Chapter 2: The beginning.


    “Aw man I got one heck of a head ache.” Said Nat waking up.

    Nat awoke in a place that looked like a prison cell except the cell wasn’t locked, she looked around and found that all her clothes were already put in the oddly placed closet.
    Also there was a plate of food with a note beside it from David:

    “Hey when you wake up head over to class room 232 I’ll be there to show you around and also eat your breakfast your gonna need the energy.- David”

    “Alright.” Nat gobbled down that breakfast in 2 seconds flat and over to room 232.

    “Hey?” Nat knocked on the door to the class room.

    “Oh come in Miss Wolf.” Said David grading papers at his desk.




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