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    dots Submission Name: An Army Of Wingsdots
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    Author: blackwolfleader
    ASL Info:    15, female
    Elite Ratio:    1.45 - 0/2/17
    Words: 4623
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    Description:
       Its longer now.

    This is about a young girl who finds her self in another world raising an army to protect it, but instead of the normal prince charming coming to save the princess romance its the girl who saves the clumsy angel guys.
    While becoming an angel herself and growing in power and responsibility, she sooner or later has to protect this group of clumsy guys who she falls in love with like a family.


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    dotsAn Army Of Wingsdots
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    Chapter 1: Kyle’s arrival shakes Mooria.


    “Finally its over!” A young girl yells to the sky. “I never want to have to take a test like that again.”

    “Don’t worry you won’t have to take a test like that till next year.”
    Another girl standing next to her explained.

    “Aww! I don’t want to ever take a test like that again ever again book me on the next flight to Never Never Land, out of here.” Said the young girl.

    “But Kyle....” The other girl stuttered.

    “Yeah exactly Kyle the blonde 15 year old street fighter and leader who
    leaves to another world, sounds like an anime right.” Kyle smiled at her friend.

    “Yeah, but Kyle if you left where would the rest of us be?”
    Asked her friend.

    “You make it sound as if I really am leader, if I left you’d guys get over me and continue on with your lives no big deal.” Kyle replied.

    “Oh I don’t think thats right.” Said the other girl.

    Both girls continued walking and walked right under a bridge in the park.

    “Hey girls I think you went the wrong way. But its to late now.”
    A group of men appeared from behind the bridge.

    “Its never to late I could just beat the crap out of you guys.”
    Kyle signaled her friend to run and she did so successfully,
    Kyle however wasn’t so lucky.


    “Ahhh!” Kyle continued to fight for several minutes before one of them grabbed her by the throat and she couldn’t breath.


    I won’t give up! Was Kyle’s last thoughts before she blacked out.

    “Give it your best angel of freedom, find them all and save your world and
    there’s. Be strong like the leader you are General of Wings.”
    Something whispered in Kyle’s as she woke up.

    Kyle looked around to see she was in a beautiful with a waterfall and
    flowers. “Where am I?”

    A young man rode up to Kyle. ” Miss your not suppose to be in the royal
    forest, but if you were heading to Newfinaleya I can give you a ride.”

    Wow he’s really hot yet what the heck is Newfinaleya and where am I
    but I guess going some where else could be better than staying here,
    thought Kyle.

    “Thank you.” Kyle tried to get on the horse but it was kinda a failure.

    “Here let me help you.” The man tried to get off the horse but fell flat on his face.

    He’s a little clumsy, thought Kyle laughing.

    Finally both of them were on the horse about thirty minutes later.

    “So what’s your name?” Asked the young man.

    “Oh its Kyle, what’s yours?” She asked.

    “Sinnery . ” Replied the young man.

    “ Sinnery thats a cool sounding name.” Said Kyle.

    Kyle looked to see they were now surrounded by a valley and a rainbow flowers, they flowers were glowing from the sunset light gleaning off of them as if they were rainbow crystals shining in a fading light.

    The horse stopped, “ Aren’t they beautiful they don’t usually shine like this,
    they only shine when two angels have meant for the first time and they're meant to be together forever... or as they legend goes.” Said Sinnery with a smiling glowing face.

    “Wow its breath taking.” Kyle looked all around the sunset was fading.

    “Quick make a wish.” Said Sinnery closing his eyes.

    Kyle closed her eyes and wished, “ I wish I was stronger so I could protect those I care about and that my destiny mite be intertwined with such
    beautiful flowers.”

    Both Kyle and Sinnery opened their eyes to see the dark purple of the
    fading sunset.

    “We should probably get going we don’t want to travel in the dark.”
    Sinnery pulled on the rains of the horse and told it to go.

    The horse caught Kyle off guard and she gripped very hard to hold on to Sinnery.

    “Be careful you don’t want to fall off the horse.” Sinnery laughed.

    “Grrr, don’t even joke about that.” Kyle said with fiery eyes and a waving fist.

    “Ok sorry.” Sinnery apologized.

    The rest of the trip the both of them stayed quit.

    But then they approached a large medieval gate, it looked like it was
    connected to a castle.

    Sinnery yelled to some guys on top of the gate and they opened it.

    “Welcome to Newfinaleya.” Sinnery waved his hand out and the horse
    galloped across the gate.

    The city which he revealed had lights surrounding it so it still seemed like day and it was full of merchants and shops and people, happy looking
    people the place was like a resonance fair.

    “It’s incredible.” Said Kyle in awe of her surroundings.

    Sinnery helped Kyle off the horse, and they both started walking together
    down the neatly pathed streets.

    “Wow this place is incredible!” Kyle said amazed.

    “I know you said that twice.” Sinnery said smiling

    Kyle blushed at Sinnery’s smile the two being together felt like a date, yet Kyle didn’t think like that she was to captivated by the weapon merchants that now surrounded her to notice the look in Sinnery’s eyes.

    “Hey look at that.” Kyle said pointing to a unique looking sword.

    The sheath of this sword was made out of a light stone painted red, with carvings of a butterfly and dove symbolizing peace and freedom.
    The handle was red with gold outlines and a ruby like gem in the center.

    “Um merchant how much is that sword?” Asked Sinnery.

    “What?! No Sinnery you don’t have to buy it for me I just thought it was
    interesting no big deal.” Kyle was a little embarrassed by Sinnery’s
    kindness.

    “Of course I do its a gift from me to you for coming to this country.”
    Sinnery said.

    “Sorry this sword is not for sell.” Said the merchant.

    Sinnery put a huge sack down,”How about now?” He asked.

    “Yes of course but first I must tell you the saying that goes along with this sword: It was made by the angels for the angels.” Said the old merchant handing Sinnery the sword.

    Wow such a weird saying, Kyle thought.

    “Here.” Sinnery handed Kyle the sword.

    Kyle unsheathed it and the blade was made just as well as the sheath,
    a very thin and sharp blade with a darkened part at the bottomed of the curved edge.

    “Mmm oddly enough this blade reminds me of some thing my grandmother used to tell me.” Said Kyle handling the sword.

    “What?” Sinnery asked curious.

    “That there has been and always will be a dark side to peace and freedom,
    depending upon who’s hand they lay in.” Said Kyle looking at the shine gleaming off the blade from the surrounding lights.

    “Mmm that sounds very interesting.” Sinnery stood quit looking at Kyle handling the sword and seemed impressed.

    “So where were we heading again?” Kyle put the sword in the sheath and strapped it to her belt.

    “Oh yeah, come on.” Sinnery and Kyle started walking again.

    They went down a straight path for a few more minutes then came upon the center of the kingdom where a large water fountain lay and a castle up a head of it, but two men with swords and cloaks stepped in their way.

    “Oh Sinnery the 4th we’ve been looking for you.” The two men unsheathed
    their swords.

    “Kyle stay ..... mmm?” Sinnery tried to get Kyle to stay back but before he looked back she had already disappeared onto the front line.
    “Hey wait a second!” Sinnery yelled.

    “Don’t worry I got this.” Said Kyle licking her lips.

    “So Sinnery has little girls fight for him now, thats just to low.”
    The two men started to laugh.
    Kyle unsheathed her sword,”Keep talking like that and I’ll cut off you tongues.” She said.

    “Oh so the little girl has balls well I guess I’ll take you on but you’ll regret it.”
    The first man gripped his sword and lowered his position.

    “Ha apparently you don’t know who your talking to old man, but I guess I’ll
    have to introduce myself since I’m new here. My name is Kyle or other wise known as Kyle the kick but fighter I’ve been captain of the kendo team for four years I know my way around the sword more than you know your way around your own pants got that old man so if any regrets this fight its gonna
    be you got it.” Said Kyle now in her own stance.

    “How dare you...” The first man was stopped by the second man coming in front of him. “Master?”

    The second guy pulled out his sword and his stance was much stronger,”
    I’ll put this girl in her place.” He said.

    “Mph try if you can, but I can see through your stance just as much as the last guy.” Said Kyle a little worried because she was lying through her teeth.

    The second man took off his cloak,” I guess I should introduce myself,
    I am Takashi Nogeto and I will kill you if you do not get out of my way.”
    He said.

    “Kyle please you must leave Takashi is a master sorcerer fighter, you will surely die if you don’t!” Yelled Sinnery.

    “So, if not me you right well whats the deference. Why can’t I take your place lives are equal aren’t they one taking the place of the other it doesn't matter right. But ya know if I do die just,” Kyle turned to Sinnery,” Keep making girls happy with that smile of yours okay.” Kyle smiled and turned back around.

    “How touching miss Kyle it seems your not all muscle, but of course this means now I do have to kill you.” Takashi started to come at Kyle in slow motion.

    His movements are so slow this guy can’t be for real right, thought Kyle.

    “Dark orb!” Takashi yelled summoning a well dark orb.

    “Oh crap!” Kyle tried to shield herself with her sword but was swallowed.

    “Kyle!” She heard Sinnery yell.

    “Crap can’t lose I won’t give up!” Kyle yelled and a beam of light came out of her sword and all she could think to say was,” I summon you
    Tarockaganosha.” The swords light got even brighter and the darkness around her faded away.

    “How did you... no human has ever been able to break the Dark Orb!”
    Takashi yelled.

    “Yeah well I guess I’m not human uh, that was pretty good but its my turn.
    Slashing wave!” A sharp wave of air appeared when Kyle made her blade cross the wind, and Takashi was cut in half and turned to dust along with his partner.”Man that was tiring, hey Sinnery are you okay?” By the time Kyle turned back to Sinnery his arms were around her.

    “Kyle your really strong but you shouldn’t scare people like that okay.”
    Sinnery looked like her was about to break out into tears.

    “Okay.” Kyle said enjoying the warmth and comfort of Sinnery’s arms.




    Chapter 2: Say What!?

    Kyle and Sinnery finally reached their destinations, the castle throne room.

    “Father father I finally found her!” Sinnery yelled in excitement.

    The herald of the castle announced,” Prince Sinnery the 4th of Newfinaleya and guest.” As they entered.

    “Hey since when have I been the plusss..... did you say Prince Mister
    Herald guy?” I asked.

    “Indeed, guest” He turned.

    Oh crap this whole time I’ve been hanging out with a prince man I feel like irony just came and stabbed me in the back for making fun of Cinderella and Snow white, crap. Thought Kyle.

    “So this is the girl all of Newfinaleya has been talking about.” The old
    looking king starred at Kyle.

    Oh crap I’m screwed I know it, Kyle thought again.

    “Yes she is going to be my bride for the coronation.” Smiled Sinnery.

    “Um you better repeat what you just said and say it slowly so I can punch you at least 50 times while you say it.” Said Kyle on fire.

    “Oh I can see your angry just let me explain...... okay I got nothing.”
    Said Sinnery.

    “I’m gonna kill you..... I mean punch you till you bleed.” Said Kyle chasing after Sinnery.

    “Is that a no?” Sinnery said running in circles.

    “Stand still so I can tear you to shreds!” Kyle yelled.

    “Both of you stop it that is not how a young woman or prince should act!”
    The king yelled.
    “Sorry.” Both Kyle and Sinnery bowed.

    “I am sorry Miss Kyle my son has never been that good with women that is why he’s had a hard time finding a wife but if you do not wish to be his bride perhaps as an offer of gratitude you could become a royal knight.”
    Said the king.

    “ Um well sure being a knight sounds like a more fitting job for me.”
    Said Kyle really thinking, awesome!

    “Well then now that thats settled we should find a place for you to stay.”
    Said the king.

    “Um your majesty I have an open place in my quarters perhaps she could stay with me.” Said a handsome young knight with brown hair and green armor.

    “Yes of course that would be perfect Sir Tretory she could stay with you and train with you. Miss Kyle you’ll be staying with Sir Tretory till we make you your own quarters he is also a royal knight so he can help you out on your first day.” Said the king.

    “Thank you your majesty.” Kyle bowed and followed Tretory.
    “Um Sinnery let go of my leg.” Kyle looked to see why she wasn’t going any where.

    “Oh come on you’ll like being queen of Newfinaleya please.”
    Begged Sinnery.

    “No I’m not ready for marriage Sinnery and I don’t doubt you’d be a great husband and that the people are nice its just I’m not ready okay.”
    Said Kyle seriously.

    “Oh alright.” Sinnery let go and walked away but before Kyle left she heard him yell,” Yeah its not me and all I have to do is wait I have a future wife I have a future wife yippee.”

    Shesh he doesn't give up dose he, Kyle thought and laughed.


    “Well here we are.” Said Tretory opening a door to a log cabin.
    The inside was really like a log cabin, the furniture, the stove,the bed room,
    even the windows. It was incredible, there was even a painting of those rainbow flowers. “Make your self at home.”

    “Okay....” Kyle just then realized something, what about her home?

    “Whats the matter Miss Kyle?” Asked Tretory.

    “Oh call me Kyle not miss, miss is for old people I’m only 15 and its just...
    I realized that I must be really far away from home and I left my friend alone,and I don’t know how to get back....” Explained Kyle.

    “So when Prince Sinnery said he found you in the royal forest alone and lost he wasn’t kidding.” Said Tretory.

    “Yeah well I don’t even know how I got there in the first place... I blacked out after that guy attacked me under the bridge then I heard some one whisper something about a general of an angel army, which was weird.”
    Kyle said sitting down in the rocking chair.

    “Did you say general of an angel army?” Asked Tretory.

    “Yeah, do you know what it meant by that?” Kyle asked.

    “Maybe... This mite be an odd question but what was the name of your planet?” Asked Tretory going through a desk.

    “Earth. Why?” Asked Kyle confused.

    “Because this planet is Mooria and here.” Tretory handed me a small silver book with white wings engraved on it.”That mite answer a few of your questions but it is late you should try and read it tomorrow and get some rest tonight.Also you should probably keep the conversation we just had a
    secrete if you tell any one you mite get yourself in trouble, good night Kyle.”
    Tretory headed for his room and went to sleep.

    Kyle however spent most of her night engaged in this book and looking at the beautiful two full moons.

    “At the beginning there was three species on planet Mooria,
    the angels who were peaceful powerful creatures, the darkness who were powerful shadow creatures who devoured souls and light and spread
    darkness, and the humans who were not good but not bad and were not powerful but waged war on each other. For a long period of time these three species lived on this planet with out encountering each other and it was peaceful, but one day the general of peace encountered the shadows and his soul was devoured by them. Some how the general lived without having his soul and when returning to the other angels he lead an army against the shadows while the other generals were gone. When the other generals returned they found all the rest of there kind dead and there general of peace leading a shadow army against them. But the head general
    the general of freedom devised a plan against him and his army. So all the generals freedom,element,light,and life and others banned there powers together to send away the general of peace’s spirit and power to someone else.But when they did this there plan back fired and sent all there spirits and powers away, and when the head generals spirit went flying it headed
    toward another planet. And the legend says the war of angels and shadows will never end until the head generals spirit returns from another world and awakens all the angels of this world.” Read Kyle from the book.

    “See what I mean.” Said Tretory at the door.

    “Yeah but what dose this have to do with me?” Kyle asked.

    “I think you mite be the general of freedom.” Tretory explained.

    “No way....I’m just lost .....I mean its not like this could really be happening right I’m just in a comma or something.” Mumbled Kyle.

    “Well what ever your destiny may be I believe that it can wait till another
    day Kyle.” Said Tretory turning the lights off and leaving.

    “All right.”Kyle snuggled in with the bed and slept.






    That morning was bright and earlier still the grass was covered in dew and the sun wasn’t completely up from its sleep. The breakfast of that morning was still asleep as well since some one was sleeping in it.

    “Umm Miss Kyle your face is in the porridge.”Tretory tapped on Kyle’s shoulder.

    “Oh sorry. I didn’t really get any sleep last night.” Kyle said getting porridge off her face.

    “Well perhaps I know what will wake you up, follow me.” Tretory lead Kyle to a large closet.”This is the armor Prince Sinnery recommended for you.”
    He said opening the closet.

    The armor was white,red,black,and gold. The armor itself had a white engraving of a dove and butterfly, the armor itself was red. The outlining of the armor was gold and the cape on the back of the armor was black.
    The armor matched the sheath of her sword perfectly.

    “Wow thats incredible.”Kyle said analyzing the armor.

    “Put it on see if it fits.” Said Tretory.

    “Alright.” Kyle walked into the next room and put it on.
    “It fits perfectly.” Kyle turned and twisted in the armor it fit her and the sword as if it were made for them.

    “Well now I think it suits you well, but if we want to get to the Bureau of Royal Knights on time we better head out now.” Said Tretory looking at Kyle with hopeful eyes.


    Kyle and Tretory headed out on horse back through the castle it took quite some time before they got to the BRK (Bureau of Royal Knights). And when they did they were greeted by the head royal knight.

    “Hello Miss Kyle I am Seditment, the head royal knight of Newfinaleya,
    and I would like to welcome you into the Royal Knights. You came highly recommended by the prince and king.” He said.

    “Yeah well I’m not perfect.”Kyle said blushing.

    “Yes well here is your first mission don’t screw up.” Seditment said pushing a piece of paper on Kyle.

    “I’ll go with you Miss Kyle.”Said Tretory.

    “Alright Mister Sediment shesh he’s rude.”Said Kyle taking the paper and ignoring Tretory.
    “Okay so I have to protect a traders caravan while on route to the kingdom of Renaissance, what a lame name.”Said Kyle now closing the paper and getting back on her horse.

    Tretory joined her,”Uh Miss Kyle we have to go this way.”Said Tretory
    pointing north.

    “Oh right yeah I knew that.”Kyle followed Tretory from that point on.

    When both of them arrived at the caravan they were in such a hurry they left then and there. The road ahead was bumpy and basically a dirt road,
    and it was quit boring till Tretory yelled,” Enemy Knight!”

    “Right I got it!” Kyle yelled.

    “Wait Miss Kyle!” Was what Tretory yelled that Kyle didn’t hear.

    “So you are a Royal Knight, Newfinaleya must be desperate to hire such a child and woman.” Said the enemy knight, his armor was gold and black.
    Meaning he was a knight from Renaissance the enemy country of
    Newfinaleya.

    “Right I’m going to make you eat those words the I’m going to kick your ass!” Kyle said getting off her horse.

    At that moment more Knights appeared from the distance, the rest of them had true royal seals meaning they were ten times as strong as this guy.

    “I better beat you and quick, Slashing Wave!” The attack cut the weakling in half and the others still approached.

    “Hey Tretory what do we do there’s a whole bunch of them should we run?”
    Kyle asked.

    “No, running is not an option if we ran they would surly kill us, but if we stand and fight we mite have a chance between the two of us.”
    Said Tretory really worried about our situation.

    “Right then maybe I can try this, Winding Slash Wave!” Kyle yelled creating a large spinning wave like a tornado heading toward the enemy.
    It knocked three of the six off there horses, but the one in the middle the scariest looking one still headed toward them. Then he stopped at least
    5 feet away.

    “I am General Sarist of the Royal Knights of Renaissance and I am not here for the caravan I am here to challenge the new royal knight who defeated are greatest sorcerer fighter Takashi Nogeto. Who mite also be the next Queen of Newfinaleya.” He shouted and echoed from that distance.

    “Did he say Sarist, you can’t fight him Kyle you’ll be killed. He’s never lost a match in his life, its even said that the race of angels have blessed him.
    So you can’t...” Tretory whined.

    “Well every one has there days, and this is his day to experience something new defeat, and maybe I can test that theory of yours if an angel blessed him I can unbless him.” Said Kyle walking forward excepting his challenge.

    “Wait!” Yelled Tretory as a distant echo.

    Sorry Tretory but if he’s the one who sent that guy Nogeto I have to get rid
    of him so Sinnery will be safe its my first duty as a royal knight.

    “ Alright Sarist, I’m telling you now that you should know the name of the person who will defeat you I am Kyle,of Newfinaleya.Now show me this strength that I have heard so much about.”
    Kyle yelled.

    Sarist dismounted and took out his sword,”Fire ball!” He yelled.

    A huge ball of flames hit Kyle and Sarist thought it was already finished but it just started...

    Chapter 3: A young warriors fight for freedom.

    “Hey Sarist remind me to ask you to the next bon fire that move of yours would be great for frying weenies, but as a killing attack I give it a 1 out of 10!” Yelled Kyle, Kyle had used her sword to block the attack. It seems
    Tarockaganosha absorbs magical attacks like a sponge.

    “How could you evade that attack unless... Flaming Winds!” Sarist tried another attack but Kyle did the same again.

    “Is that really all you’ve got, aw man and he called me weak.”
    Kyle mocked Sarist.

    “You! I will not let my good name be destroyed by a child! Inferno Blast!”
    This attack was stronger then the others and Kyle could not evade it.

    Her body went up in the flames but it did not burn, the flames surrounded her naked body like a dance between the two of them.

    “How can she not be turning to ashes?” Asked Sarist.

    “Kyle!” Yelled Tretory seeing it from a far off distance.

    “Wait General look!” Yelled another knight.

    “How can that be possible!?” Yelled Sarist.

    Kyle had wings on her back and she was now flying in the fire with her eyes as blue as the ocean but her spirit as red and dark as the fire around her,
    there was no doubt about it she was the General of Freedom. And in an angelic like voice she was starting to saw something.

    “It has been 2,000 years since our brethren have been sealed, but my return has been prophesied and now it is time we settle the matter between the darkness and the light so awaken my brothers let our powers unite
    and let us raise an army to send the darkness back to whence they came.”

    After that Sarist and his knights ran, and the flames disappeared. Kyle fell back to the ground naked and no wings, Tretory went up to Kyle and put his cape over her.
    “Hey what happened I blacked out there did I win?” Kyle asked really weak.

    “Well sort of I’ll explain everything when we get back to the castle.” Tretory picked Kyle up and put her on the horse told the caravan it was safe and headed back to the castle.





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