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Submission Name: broken record dots

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Author:	Mscreant
Elite Ratio:	2.39 - 2/2/6
Words:	21

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	32
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	234

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broken record dots

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Inner cacophony
Rages relentlessly
Absent directionality

Destructive tendency
Accuses thoroughly
Excavates memory

Rampant miscreancy
Lost loyalty
Stained victory

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