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    dots Submission Name: you were my depressiondots
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    Author: mandy dupuis
    Elite Ratio:    3.3 - 109/138/57
    Words: 213
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsyou were my depressiondots
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    In case your wondering I'm doing alright these days.
    There is fewer saddness and more time to make memories.
    Your were my depression.
    I let you go.


    In one of my dreams you forgive yourself for all the bad decisions that keep you inside your head
    It's impossible for my to rearrange your ways of thinking. All the things your loosing. You may as well resign yourself and make a change.

    I wish I was your daughter so that you could believe me.
    And I could tell you that I'm doing alright these days.
    Inside your head you have alcohol that feeds your thoughts.
    Making it impossible for you to sleep at night. Sometimes me either.

    If you could see that I am your daughter would you listen to what I have to say?
    You've never believed you had a reason to stop picking up the diseases, but aren't you tired of tiring to figure you thoughts out.
    Shouldn't you wash your eyes of everything, dress your body with something other then black.

    If I were your daughter and it wasn't just a dream, to me, would you help me from coming home alone.
    Fill a spot in my soul.
    I let you go....




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