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I opened my eyes when I herd your voice I've never felt alive I could see the colors of the world You brought me to life I could feel you breathing into me When I walk into this light I could do anything cause of you Nothing I couldn't fight Can it be I've always been dead? A life so dark there's nothing said Standing behind the mirror tonight Watching this life fall out of sight Was there a purpose for me to live? A motive to have a heart to give Vacant is this heart feeling so foul Deserted like a desert lays my soul You came to me Clouds all around Can you feel it pumping? In your hands bleeding I gave it to you This life was for you Now you leave me Thunder surrounds I can feel the lightning As you're striking me down This life all for you I only lived for you Now as my mind starts to part No longer can I bear this heart No reflection after my last glance You've deprived me of my last chance So I venture to the edge of death For in this life I've nothing left If you think this wound will ever heal I won't live if it was my heart you steal I know you're out there watching me Is this how we were meant to be? You tore down my walls to let me out Then abounded me to roam about The faces on the wall are staring At this monster that's now bleeding You've pried open my chest Closing my eyes never letting me rest You came to me Clouds all around Can you feel it pumping? In your hands bleeding I gave it to you This life was for you Now you leave me Thunder surrounds I can feel the lightning As you're striking me down This life all for you I only lived for you |
The sadness in this piece has me in tears. It's beautiful nonetheless. This is a very strong piece and the range of emotions that it goes through is amazing. I often times wish I didn't have a heart to feel...but only because I know the pain of love and wanting to do anything for the one I love no matter how much it hurt me. The heart can be a treacherous thing. Krys | Posted on 2009-11-12 00:00:00 | by takenspiritwind | [ Reply to This ] | Painful like truth! You see, i also want to die for someone, so i can be with him all the time and enter in his dreams and protect and shield him from evil and love him... but God is watchimg somewhere and if you have faith, miracles do happen and love is at the core of all miracles. I know it doesn't review the poem but i am only a messenger of hope who believes in delaying the end till one's real life task is accomplished. | I am sorry for my crude and unrefined comment but it was honest. | Posted on 2009-11-07 00:00:00 | by sombreanddim | [ Reply to This ] | |