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    Author: nsc
    Elite Ratio:    2.8 - 53/37/14
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 37
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 521



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    So

    So what should I say
    Should it be something you want to hear
    Perhaps a truth that I decide
    Should it be something I should fabricate to fill the void between you and I
    I don’t mean to be so empty
    I don’t mean to be so apathetic that neither you nor I can feel remorse
    I don’t want regret to justify the reason we gave up
    I don’ t want my insecurities to be a measure of your ability to forgive
    I am sorry
    I am so, so, sorry.




    Submitted on 2009-11-07 03:57:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this.
    its a bit raw, which is why i mainly like it,
    lets not forget that its also blunt and to the point, quite personally not my style but you did really good with it!
    and most importantly, with only a couple of words you've made this peice quite powerful.
    now that i think on it-FAVE!
    | Posted on 2009-11-09 00:00:00 | by Thief | [ Reply to This ]



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