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    dots Submission Name: Antidote to Sanity (WIP)dots
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    Author: LaxGoalie
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 6/4/8
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAntidote to Sanity (WIP)dots
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    Let me be your antidote to sanity
    The person to show you clarity
    Finding yourself at a split in your life
    You have a choice to make, do it right.

    I will be your antidote to sanity
    Time to get rid of all this vanity
    The you see every time you look in the mirror
    The choice can make things clearer




    Submitted on 2009-11-08 09:04:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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