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    dots Submission Name: Another WIPdots
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    Author: LaxGoalie
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 6/4/8
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAnother WIPdots
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    I know why you hate me
    This feeling is one that cant escape me
    I just dont want it to be this way
    Can you find it in your heart to stay





    Submitted on 2009-11-09 13:41:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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