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    dots Submission Name: Another WIPdots

    Author: LaxGoalie
    Elite Ratio:    2.51 - 6/4/8
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    dotsAnother WIPdots

    I know why you hate me
    This feeling is one that cant escape me
    I just dont want it to be this way
    Can you find it in your heart to stay

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