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Say What?

Author: Cayman
ASL Info:    31
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Say What?

Slap me in the face, what just happened?
Mind caught blindsided by emotions
Are you kidding me? hee hee

Nope I’m not kidding, playing or boasting
I’m just saying how I feel
Keeping it real and letting you know it’s on like Donkey Kong

You feel for me and I feel for you
It feels so good to miss you
Fact of the matter is, I’ve never yearned for anyone like I do for you

Just makes the moment even more special
So tell me that you miss me
We’ll just miss each other till we kiss each other

Submitted on 2009-11-09 16:04:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is a very- playfull piece. I think everything goes together alright although the first stanza set sounds alittle off with the ideas of the rest of it.
| Posted on 2009-11-12 00:00:00 | by isis_lenore | [ Reply to This ]

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