Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: For the Thirddots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: AquamanEffect
    Elite Ratio:    1.49 - 0/1/20
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 28
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 616



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsFor the Thirddots
    -------------------------------------------


    Line in a line,
    First, second, third.
    Columns, rows, faces and bodies shine;
    death in their hands, a bird

    of prey
    Crawls the air,
    watching, waiting.
    Death begins there.

    War over tea...
    Better yet over chess.
    A lost game
    A whispered name ( the pronoun ''She").

    "The Third!"
    That would be their cry,
    prepared to die.
    A bird,

    of prey.
    Full of death,
    the death of men.
    Lost in their cry, it heard
    "For the Third!"




    Submitted on 2009-11-10 23:19:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.