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Notice Me

Author: juss_kriss
ASL Info:    23/F/Canada
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Words: 259
Class/Type: Lyrics /Longing
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about someone i was always able to look up to and thought would always be there for me. this person played a huuuuuuge role in my life but lately they've been pushing not only me, but practically everyone else away too.

i wonder if you can figure out who it is?

Notice Me

i'd never say i hate you
but i'm starting to feel that way
after the hard times we've been through
how could you just turn yourself away
you were always the one i looked up to
the one i always could run to
but as these days fade away
i can feel myself fading too
can you hear me calling for you ?

i'm standing right in front of you
can't you see me
how loud do you expect me to screan
before you even notice me
i needed you
i thought you'd be here for me
but i'm left standing alone
how loud do you want me to scream
do you even notice me
notice me

i never thought i'd leave you
but now i've got to get myself out
i'd try to explain it to you
you don't know what i'm talking about
the hole in my hearts' just become too big
these wounds are too deep to forgive
and as i keep on bleeding
the mask i'm wearing is slipping too
can you see me begging for you ?

is the image in your head all you can see
is the reflection in the mirror the only one you have time for
is the person you wish to become above me
cause suddenly i'm the least of your worries
my hero, no not anymore
when you've become the only one
that you're fighting for

how loud do you expect me to scream

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  A very powerful piece Kriss. I especially liked the lines:
"is the image in your head all you can see
is the reflection in the mirror the only one you have time for"
It seems that is the way many people turn out and it is painful to watch the transition and loose someone close to their own self obsession. This definitely had a good feel for the context, a bit rough and quick paced which matched the circumstances and helped put the reader in the subjects mindset. Great work as always kriss, keep writing.
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