Notice Me
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about someone i was always able to look up to and thought would always be there for me. this person played a huuuuuuge role in my life but lately they've been pushing not only me, but practically everyone else away too.
i wonder if you can figure out who it is?
i wonder if you can figure out who it is?
Notice Me
v1. i'd never say i hate you but i'm starting to feel that way after the hard times we've been through how could you just turn yourself away you were always the one i looked up to the one i always could run to but as these days fade away i can feel myself fading too can you hear me calling for you ? ch. i'm standing right in front of you can't you see me how loud do you expect me to screan before you even notice me i needed you i thought you'd be here for me but i'm left standing alone how loud do you want me to scream do you even notice me notice me v2. i never thought i'd leave you but now i've got to get myself out i'd try to explain it to you you don't know what i'm talking about the hole in my hearts' just become too big these wounds are too deep to forgive and as i keep on bleeding the mask i'm wearing is slipping too can you see me begging for you ? br. is the image in your head all you can see is the reflection in the mirror the only one you have time for is the person you wish to become above me cause suddenly i'm the least of your worries my hero, no not anymore when you've become the only one that you're fighting for co. how loud do you expect me to scream |
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| A very powerful piece Kriss. I especially liked the lines: "is the image in your head all you can see is the reflection in the mirror the only one you have time for" It seems that is the way many people turn out and it is painful to watch the transition and loose someone close to their own self obsession. This definitely had a good feel for the context, a bit rough and quick paced which matched the circumstances and helped put the reader in the subjects mindset. Great work as always kriss, keep writing. Sarah | Posted on 2016-07-06 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ] | |
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