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    dots Submission Name: The Sun My Sun Please Do Erasedots
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    Author: HisNameIsNoMore
    ASL Info:    28 - Male - Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.08 - 75/182/217
    Words: 236
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThe Sun My Sun Please Do Erasedots
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    Contorted in a figurative Hell, bound to the limitation before my eyes, like an illusion it erases the impending dusk at the end of day.
    Maybe it was much more of a literal Hell, and maybe just maybe I will straighten it out, just not this emptiness in my lack of consciousness.
    Blank stares are produced, ready to be re-written into something worth feeling.
    Seize the way those impending glares come, even the walls with eyes cast me to this cold earth.
    Every tear jerking memory, laughter and smiles produce this broken bridge from accaptence to failure.

    Oh lover, no lover to name.
    Oh mother, your embrace has saved.
    Oh father, I'm sorry your son has a blackheart and never cries.
    Oh nation, my nation no road to walk home at night.

    Monday came and went, such happiness and joy came.
    Tuesday came the grim reality that all was a lie, I thought you felt the same way when you were with me.
    Wedsday was a pain and everything was overcast gray and dying.
    It doesnt matter what day we go through, all I know is that...
    I can't take it.
    I savor every single kiss goodbye.
    I just wish I could wake from it.

    Oh nightmare, dreams come awake.
    Oh sun, my sun please wash my face.
    The happiness I felt has been misplaced.
    The tragedy is I have no one today.




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      This is...well words cannot describe the emotions this work caused my heart to feel. memories of the past, and present exchanges.

    Monday, I remember that day all to well. Where the sky was bright, love was in the air. Yes. Just like you, my friend.

    Tuesday, the grim reality sank in that it was all taken from me, never really was real anyway.

    Sucks, right? Love?

    Your work, brought all that. I feel like favoring it. just because, it speaks of all my love lives. Haha. Lame excuse, right?

    Well, I'm sure the bright rays of the sun will come eventually. But remember...

    "Where the sun sets, the moon rises to give light to the dark road ahead. Remember, you are never alone"

    Cheers
    | Posted on 2010-04-01 00:00:00 | by Dark Dann | [ Reply to This ]


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