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    dots Submission Name: Too far to be toucheddots
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    Author: wolfgurl830
    ASL Info:    18/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.96 - 42/38/34
    Words: 317
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 550
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    dotsToo far to be toucheddots
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    Your type of people can be a-holes
    Think they’re the best because they’re at the top
    They’re all made up but underneath it they’re trolls
    So why do we fall in love with you
    Because I know there is no way you can meet me

    You’re far away
    Busy with your stardom
    Can you just look my way?
    We could be friends have fun
    But you’re in the center of the sun
    To far to be touched


    Just to see you not as a fan but a friend
    Understand that you’ve changed my world
    Sit with me just for a second
    To not realize me as just another fan
    In another world it just can’t be
    No never, how could you ever see?


    You’re to far away
    To busy with your stardom
    Hey look my way
    I don’t want to be just another stray
    You’re in the sun
    And you can’t be touched


    Usher changes everyone’s life
    He could change mine
    Or anyone’s and they’d forget about the normal people


    Be more than those other people
    In the top out of simple
    Enter the lives of the people who love you
    But at the center of the galaxy what could come true
    Everyone yells your name
    Remember that being at the top can get pretty lame


    I want you to be on earth
    Not on planet Jupiter with the other major stars
    Yeah you don’t know me
    I’m too far
    Could you change my life just like that?
    I wish I could know you everyday
    And not be so far away


    We could be friends have fun
    But you’re in the center of the sun
    To far to be touched


    To far…
    To far…
    I wish I knew you so much
    And you weren't so far to be touched




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