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    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    Chaos! There has been chaos within my heart, running through my veins throughout the past week. A unique consolation of words that could explain; however, not so glorious in their poetic potential. -the weekend was especially a treat. What to say? What to story-tell concerning the matter? My heart, shattered and reborn. My soul, tormented and caressed.
    The end.
    -for now.
    For now, right now, I am content. -again. I long to have things remain, remain this way. -in any way. Things just to remain happy. Remain happy!
    I am right now. It's all the matters.




    Submitted on 2009-11-12 22:48:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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