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    dots Submission Name: Familiar Strangerdots
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    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 345
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 941



    Description:
       This is really not a typical poem...lets if if anyone can actually get what I'm talking about.


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    dotsFamiliar Strangerdots
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    Kissing my skin he takes my very breath away.

    So soft and gentle and sensual.

    He's my comfort when none is offered.

    He whispers the sweetest things into begging ears.

    As he caresses my face I close my eyes

    and enjoy the supple touch.

    Chills spill down my spine and total bliss

    fills every vein.

    He judges not my tears or pain

    he loves me unconditionally.

    As I wait for him to come around

    I think of nothing but him.

    I can feel him with me

    even though we are apart.

    When at last he arrives his kiss to my

    skin leaves me without air.

    He's the familiar stranger I've grown to

    love and adore.

    He's the wind of fate and he calls

    to me daily.




    Submitted on 2009-11-12 22:59:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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