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    dots Submission Name: Sacrificesdots
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    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Love
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    Bytes: 199



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       A quote I made up one day. It really speaks to me.


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    dotsSacrificesdots
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    The sacrifices we make no matter

    how difficult, will always be worth

    it in the end because with out

    those sacrifices how does

    love survive?




    Submitted on 2009-11-12 23:05:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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