[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: after great pain, a formal feeling comes-dots

    Author: gorge
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 32
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 517
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 271


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsafter great pain, a formal feeling comes-dots

    much madness is divinest sense
    to a discerning eye
    much sense--the starkest madness
    "tis the majority
    in this,as all, prevail-
    assent-and you are sane-
    demur-you're straightway dangerous-
    and handled with a chain

    Submitted on 2009-11-13 01:18:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (6) written by endlessgame23
    AI written by poetotoe
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    Cosmic Dreams written by Chelebel
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (final) written by endlessgame23
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    written by Daniel Barlow
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Brigit written by endlessgame23
    Whiteout written by layDsayD
    Blood Stains Are The Worst written by ForgottenGraves
    Or are we written in the sand? written by Chelebel
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    the living moment written by ShyOne
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD
    World I No Longer Want written by ForgottenGraves
    written by Daniel Barlow
    Fasade written by jackz




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]