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    dots Submission Name: damn love songsdots
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    Author: Jessica Lynn
    ASL Info:    22/f/mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 121/119/57
    Words: 326
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 550
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    dotsdamn love songsdots
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    Turn on the radio,
    Turn it off again.
    Sick of hearing of this and that,
    Disgusting love affairs.

    Needs and wants,
    Desires and such.
    Is the restraint
    Worth a tender touch?

    I donít think so-
    Not this lady.
    Wanna love me?
    Wanna hate me?
    (haha)

    I donít need anyone,
    To tuck me in at night.
    Cuz Iím out partying with my friends,
    And weíre gonna start a riot.

    So let me hear you raise your voice,
    All you who agree.
    Too many damn
    love songs today,
    Címon sing with me.

    Iím saying-
    Independent women-
    Who do you answer to?
    Donít lie to me now ladies!
    I hope the answerís you.

    (Oh yeah!)
    I donít need anyone,
    To tuck me in at night.
    Cuz Iím out partying with my friends,
    And weíre gonna start a riot!

    So let me hear you raise your voice,
    All you who agree.
    Too many damn love songs today,
    Címon sing with me!

    Now boyís out there,
    You feel that pulling,
    Of the leash at your neck.
    Cut that sucker,
    Itís time to party,
    Join us for your sake!

    Arenít you sick
    Of that quiet naggin,
    Day in and day out?
    Címon guys-
    Letís take a second.
    Take some time for yourself!

    OH!
    I donít need anyone,
    To tuck me in at night.
    Cuz Iím out partying with my friends,
    And weíre gonna start a riot.

    So let me hear you raise your voice,
    All you who agree.
    Too many damn
    love songs today,
    Címon sing with me.

    Oh sing with me!
    Sing it with me!

    Weíre all strong
    Weíre all fighters
    Tonight weíre gonna start a riot!
    Turn mushy love song off,
    Let yourself go!
    Sing this song

    Oh-
    Start a riot.
    Start a riot.
    Start
    A
    Riot!
    Damn love songs. . .




    Submitted on 2009-11-14 17:31:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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