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    dots Submission Name: Modern Day American Dreamdots
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    Author: Jessica Lynn
    ASL Info:    22/f/mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 121/119/57
    Words: 255
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 1665
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1802



    Description:
       Just a rebellious song. . .


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    dotsModern Day American Dreamdots
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    Pretty, pretty, princess-
    You can’t even touch this.
    Read the message that you sent,
    So I stole your boyfriend!

    Look at those curls
    Those perfect teeth.
    Those twinkling eyes,
    I can’t believe,
    That you still think,
    That we all love you,
    American dream.
    We never knew you.

    Flip back to the present day,
    And you see me standing here.
    Check out my piercings-
    My tattoos, my chopped up short hair.

    I am the modern day-
    American dream!
    Society’s protégée-
    Don’t ya love me!?

    When I see
    those prissy brats,
    They look down at me-
    And I just laugh!
    When I’m at my place-
    And the party’s kickin-
    They’ll be home alone-
    And I’ll be thinking-

    Flip back to the present day,
    And you see me standing here.
    Check out my piercings-
    My tattoos, my chopped up short hair.

    I am the modern day-
    American dream!
    Society’s protégée-
    Don’t ya love me!?
    (hahaha)

    So I’m a bitch-
    One of those
    bad chicks-
    I’m not offended-
    I recommend it!
    So what if pink
    Is not my color.
    No one’s complaining
    That I’d rather,
    Make a scene,
    Or scream out loud,
    I’m not ashamed,
    Haha, I’m proud!

    Flip back to the present day,
    And you see me standing here.
    Check out my piercings-
    My tattoos, my chopped up short hair.

    I am the modern day-
    American dream!
    Society’s protégée-
    Don’t ya love me!?


    Oh don’t ya-
    Don’t ya
    Don’t ya love me?




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