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Windows to your soul


Author: Jessica Lynn
ASL Info:    22/f/mn
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Words: 413
Class/Type: Lyrics /Serious
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I thought it would be rather interesting to write a song in the character of a guy. :)


Windows to your soul



It was raining on the black top,
I was soaking in the cold.
The wind was singing to me,
And suddenly I felt so old.

I looked at her, and she looked down.
I could tell that she was scared.
We both knew what was happening,
When the silence hung in the air.

I can’t do this anymore-
Her words fell down with the rain.
I told her that I understood,
I told her I was okay.

For a moment she just looked at me-
And shook her head in disbelief.
I knew that soon she’d ask me why,
When she did I could only reply:

Beautiful dreamer,
I know why you go.
I never saw forever
In the windows to your soul.

I can’t say I won’t miss you,
But I thought that you should know-
I know I’d never make you happy-
So we have to let this go-
I see it in the windows to your soul.

I saw the tears leave her eyes,
And fall down her face.
I was comforted by thought,
That someone better would take my place.

So we went our separate ways,
And in the cold, wind, and rain-
Alone on that dark November day,
I did my best to explain-

Beautiful dreamer,
I know why you go.
I never saw forever
In the windows to your soul.

I can’t say I won’t miss you,
But I thought that you should know-
I know I’d never make you happy-
So we have to let this go-
I see it in the windows to your soul.

Six months later,
In the late days of May-
I saw her walking with a bunch of friends
But I didn’t know what to say.

When she saw me standing my myself,
She smiled at me, and broke through the crowd.
She said thank you so much for what you’ve done,
Finally I see the sun!
I said I don’t know what you mean-
She said remember what you said to me?

Beautiful dreamer,
I know why you go.
I never saw forever
In the windows to your soul.

I can’t say I won’t miss you,
But I thought that you should know-
I know I’d never make you happy-
So we have to let this go-
I see it in the windows to your soul.




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  I liked this. It was very deep and very passionate. Awesome.
| Posted on 2009-11-14 00:00:00 | by KindredSpirit | [ Reply to This ]


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