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    Author: ModestyB
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 64/38/31
    Words: 129
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Shadows creep across the room silently, stealthily,
    hiding imagined horrors that lurk, in the corner
    or behind the door of the wardrobe.

    The need to reach out and flick a switch
    is tempered by the fear
    of touching an unknown, or worse,
    something grasping your outstretched hand.

    Each creak and bump becomes,
    in your mind, a beast, a burglar, an ogre.
    A scurrying of mice or a phalanx of spiders
    bearing down on you.

    Paralyzed by fear,
    your mind cannot stop thinking
    of ghosts and ghouls and
    all things that crawl

    Cocoon yourself in the covers
    safety lies within
    solace from the greatest threat
    your own imagination.




    Submitted on 2009-11-15 07:40:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The mind most certainly does play havoc with our imagination and thoufgts......a well written piece from you.

    Frank.
    | Posted on 2009-11-15 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]


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