Description: This is about... my thoughts and emotions at the moment my first thing here so please be nice-ish Iím not the best at poetry so I might just start a story or something... Iím not sure I guess tell me what you think and I will make the decision.
This poem is actually interesting, with a little revision and editing this could make a wonderful poem, I believe. I love the rhyming aspects, I love the idea of bubblegum, and I love the chorus. If you want any idea's on how to make it any better, I can try and help. :)