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    dots Submission Name: I'm Still Your Little Girldots
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    Author: smexybabe0101
    Elite Ratio:    2.84 - 25/31/66
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsI'm Still Your Little Girldots
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    When you stop me from doing things,
    I know youíre doing them for my good.
    Youíve looked out for me since I was young,
    Since I would just fit right on your chest,
    And I know youíll keep doing that until the end of your day.

    Sometimes I say things I donít mean,
    I get overwhelmed and forget your reasons for things,
    And say hurtful words like ĎI hate youí,
    And I hope you know that I never mean it.
    I hope you know that I would never mean it.

    You and me, me and you,
    We can be such good friends at times,
    When weíre doing things we both love,
    But at times we can both get on each otherís nerves,
    And we both know it.

    As we sit together,
    At the bar,
    Screaming and hollering at the TV on the wall,
    Where people are dashing in and out of each other,
    Trying to score touchdowns,
    You are one of my favourite people.

    We can chuckle and laugh,
    At ridiculous plays that go very badly.
    We can complain and groan,
    At the terrible losses,
    We can grin and high-five,
    At the winning of our favourite teams.

    Itís odd how much we have in common,
    From how we were both born on the 7th of a month that starts with A,
    From how we seem to have similar music tastes.
    We can be worst enemies,
    But we can also be best friends,

    I just wish you could trust me like you used to,
    Before I made mistakes,
    And I ruined all we had.
    I know it will take a lot for you to get over it,
    But Iím still your little girl.




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