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    dots Submission Name: This Summerdots
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    Author: Cayman
    ASL Info:    31
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 182/168/72
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThis Summerdots
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    When you find a love thatís real, hold on and see what you feel
    Take a try just once more, me amore we adore.

    This summer will be different, come away with me
    Think of those sunny days and imagine all our ways

    This summer will be spectacular, we will seek Godís grace together
    Take a glimpse at my humanity and see how it makes you feel.

    Summertime will be the right time with sweet and sensual sublime
    Learning from what we went through, knowing the future starts anew

    This summer is going to show us where the story goes
    Distant voyages to cosmic paradise

    This summer we will begin and never end.




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