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    dots Submission Name: There Is No Chance.dots
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    Author: Shadowstar13
    Elite Ratio:    4.88 - 183/171/118
    Words: 482
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Life is just... I don't know what to make of it!

    Note to self: become a psychologist.


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    dotsThere Is No Chance.dots
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    There is no chance for you, child.
    This silver tongue I doubt you believed, but nevertheless, I tried my hand.

    This poison anesthesia, I insinuated into you-to make you believe,
    to make you forget.

    It's not a lie I told to you-no, countless truths,
    cutting so deep the marrow dripped gold with veritas,
    shone in the sun like a beacon.

    Nevertheless, I said I'd try.

    You know, I know I lied.

    I cannot sic my slinking, serpent siren's voice upon slabs of petrified oak and glazed, grazed marble.
    Cold, unyielding; brittle, fragile: they are immune to the whispering of the wind,
    the laughing of the lies and mostly truths as I
    dance with lips dripping of honey and vinegar, these
    hybrid eyes burning with arsenic,
    drowning in the smell of orchids,
    that flower that lives forever, or dies so sweetly, sickeningly, hypnotically, in the attempt.

    That which is inanimate
    does not care if it burns. It just
    does.
    Poison most potent can only dissolve a hole
    in a slab.
    Flowers can overcrawl it, but it is
    chlorophyll-leeching work...
    to suck life out of that which never walked
    and burst through the stone.

    It can be done, but over halflifes and lifetimes. I do not
    have that much time left to waste.

    Three integers, two reasons, one syllable, and half an answer.
    No.

    Trust plays a part and I can't trust
    used too easily. You remind me
    of a smile I knew, on the face
    of an insidious snake, who
    slithered into my mind,
    and infected it utterly:
    its venom still throbs,
    in my skull to this
    day. Like malaria
    I think these
    marks will
    never go
    away.

    Not a noun, this beast-if so, only abstract. Merely
    a symptom, but the best of the worst of the woes.

    I hate to admit it, but I am not yet
    immune to the knives, as wind
    to the lies-I can't pick them up and
    fling them, throwing them far, far away
    so the sound never reaches the ears.

    I could be picking my wars.
    But I rather doubt it
    and so do you.

    I cannot stand it. I can't.

    I am paranoid, with my sixth eye always whirling
    and my mind working out the new ways
    that the world is screwing me over.
    You could figure
    among that equation

    and I am NOT
    will NOT
    bare my back for the knife
    so I can figure that out.

    There is no chance for you.

    It's not a lie I told to you-no, countless truths,
    cutting so deep the marrow dripped gold with veritas,
    shone in the sun like a beacon.

    Nevertheless, I said I'd try.

    You know, I know I lied.

    For protection-yours, theirs


    and of course,

    theirs

    and

    mine.




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