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    dots Submission Name: Hollaweendots
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    Author: emogirl5000
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    Description:
       I just found this on my computer, but changed a few things! <3


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    dotsHollaweendots
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    At Halloween I see crunchy leaves,
    like a blanket, on the ground.
    I see pumpkins that are all around,
    their candles flickering in the breeze.

    The sounds I hear are other trick-or-treaters.
    Those trick-or-treaters are screaming.
    I hear the sounds of the crunchy leaves.
    That sound that like owls screeching.

    I smell the candles inside the pumpkins,
    they are like cinnamon and spice.
    I think I can smell my candy,
    and that's really, really nice.




    Submitted on 2009-11-17 18:04:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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