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    dots Submission Name: I Choose Life.dots

    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Society
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    dotsI Choose Life.dots

    What is life without an owner to its precious moments?
    People profess to own things, a lot of things.
    Life is the most general of these,
    and the most taken for granted.
    Does anybody realize they own their life? They alone hold it?
    People are not worth being spoken for; they can't be spoken for.
    Speaking for myself, that's
    -still impossible, yet plausible.
    Without a doubt, I do not "appreciate" what is called life-
    Do I deserve it? Absolutely, damn it.
    What is deserving?
    -owning! Own your life.
    Otherwise it's just a meaningless tap dance, where if one dances fast enough one believes they have "earned" that ownership.
    You are the God of your life; everything in it.
    So cheesy.

    Submitted on 2009-11-18 10:40:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I really like this. It's different, and meaningful. It really made me think. I enjoyed reading it. Its excellent

    | Posted on 2010-02-18 00:00:00 | by phsycoticangel | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this, something to think about. Of course one owns one's life, the gift that crowns an otherwise unwieldly lump of meat, edible when life has not left not it too long ago, and good for manure for feeding the roses when it has passed its "eat by date." Life is the miracle of the earth, look after it, and thank God for it! Thanks for posting it. Ted.
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 00:00:00 | by edcherry | [ Reply to This ]
    If you can't own your own life, what do you have???

    I love the people who own it all but the mistakes *rolling my eyes*... those always seem to belong to someone else, and they're left clouding up an otherwise beautiful picture.

    I love my mistakes... I wouldn't be the wreck I am today without every single one.
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      Hmm.. i find this rather interesting and quite true.

    It is very good to question society every once in a while, it keeps you on your toes.

    Well done!
    | Posted on 2009-11-18 00:00:00 | by dthforeverpain8 | [ Reply to This ]

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