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    dots Submission Name: This Timedots
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    Author: StephE
    ASL Info:    34/Female/Sacramento, CA
    Elite Ratio:    2.88 - 10/10/16
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 589
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 953



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    Please seduce me.....Touch my skin.
    Let me feel that sensation again,
    Having you close...To hear your heart,
    The tingling begins to start,
    Warming my body as it flows through,
    Each passing second...the more I want you.
    Engaged in a passionate kiss,
    A dance with our tongues upon our lips.
    Your hands gliding down the crest of my tits,
    Then my nipples are teased with your nibbles, sucks and licks,
    Grinding your groin in sync with mine,
    Two naked bodies have come entwine.
    The heat between us-now a steady burn,
    Every inch of our bodies, we have learned.

    And then....

    Inside....
    I feel you dip
    Curling my toes
    the sheets I grip.
    An orgasmic climax
    as our souls unite,
    Quivering in excitement, We relish the time.
    We lay embraced,
    Satisfaction said by the smiles on our face.




    Submitted on 2009-11-18 11:55:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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