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    dots Submission Name: The Jester - Prince Of Smiles dots
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    Author: KindredSpirit
    ASL Info:    20, Male, Burlington Iowa
    Elite Ratio:    2 - 54/139/173
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 456
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 606



    Description:
       This piece is not permanent. Its what i'd like to call a (test) piece.


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    dotsThe Jester - Prince Of Smiles dots
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    Tarred and feathered, your made the fool to make us laugh.
    Even greater the challenge, you still take a chance.
    The jester, the clown... Self designed to bring a smile.
    Yet the hollow laughter lingers for a moment, then dissolves.
    Left a moron in rainbow fantastic clothes.
    Left the servant on smiles that fade.

    The jester, the clown... Anxious to turn that frown upside down.
    With goofy tricks and a retards ignorance bliss.
    A combination, fit for a fool.
    Take a bow, mighty prince of smiles.
    The next show will be your last.




    Submitted on 2009-11-18 13:58:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      why did u delete that
    | Posted on 2009-11-21 00:00:00 | by fuckinsprinkles | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very...interesting. Whatever may come of this is going be great. Goodluck !
    | Posted on 2009-11-19 00:00:00 | by LiChan | [ Reply to This ]


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