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Where were you?

Author: ModestyB
Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 64 /38 /31
Words: 113
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Where were you?

Where were you last night
when I came looking for you?
Were you with her again
Or, this time, someone new ?
I need to know, if I’m to be
The one left behind, once more.

Trust you, you say
How can I, I reply
How many times have
I been betrayed
How many have there been
Since we married?

You can leave now
I’ve had all I can take
Go to her or go to hell
I don’t care anymore
Take what you need
Just leave me my pride.

Submitted on 2009-11-19 12:06:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  very stong emotion, i can sorry you've had to feel this pain

| Posted on 2009-12-28 00:00:00 | by vLame | [ Reply to This ]

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