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    dots Submission Name: Where were you?dots
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    Author: ModestyB
    Elite Ratio:    2.08 - 62/38/31
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 72
    Average Vote:    4.5000
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    dotsWhere were you?dots
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    Where were you last night
    when I came looking for you?
    Were you with her again
    Or, this time, someone new ?
    I need to know, if I’m to be
    The one left behind, once more.

    Trust you, you say
    How can I, I reply
    How many times have
    I been betrayed
    How many have there been
    Since we married?

    You can leave now
    I’ve had all I can take
    Go to her or go to hell
    I don’t care anymore
    Take what you need
    Just leave me my pride.




    Submitted on 2009-11-19 12:06:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very stong emotion, i can relate...im sorry you've had to feel this pain

    *hugs*
    | Posted on 2009-12-28 00:00:00 | by vLame | [ Reply to This ]


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