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    dots Submission Name: How to Hate Your 2 Yr Olddots
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    Author: stonewashblues
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       Alektorophobia is a terrible thing...


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    dotsHow to Hate Your 2 Yr Olddots
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    Start with a little blue painted sand bucket
    full of loose corn, and a little girl looking for justice
    in a chicken pen, and you'll have your setting.

    Add a dominant rooster, and then tell her to feed the chickens. Explain to her they will share.

    Leave her alone there to throw a piece of corn at a time, yelling "Chicken take a turn!" and then watch the fun begin.

    25 years have passed, and I'm still terrified of poultry to this day.




    Submitted on 2009-11-20 17:58:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Oh my gosh that is soo sad but funny at the same time, not to be mean, but wow if your mother really did that to you then she was horrible. but this was actually good how you wrote it.
    | Posted on 2009-11-23 00:00:00 | by MiseryMarie | [ Reply to This ]


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