Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Pete's Owner Must Diedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: misschalloner
    ASL Info:    24.F.CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.28 - 45/42/24
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 665
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 825



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsPete's Owner Must Diedots
    -------------------------------------------


    Sure, they have their uses.
    Such machines achieve, usually, point a to point b.
    Provision of luxuries such as heating, cooling, auditory pleasure, and who can forget the magnificent cup holders!
    Yes, indeed, what beneficial and arguably gorgeous at times machines.
    One is evil.
    With its particular ruby color, its bizarre new age shell, and horrid turning radius - this reminder of hell sends shivers.
    Caring enough, I would name it "pete".
    >slight momentary smile< -and it dies, so quickly.
    These memories are too much!
    Those crumb-infested comfy seats complimented with an overly cluttered dashboard and such.
    An obvious impact, yet foolish.
    Pete, you are innocent in all of your ruby glory.
    Too bad you are who drives you.




    Submitted on 2009-11-21 01:57:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Quirky. This is ridiculously quirky, and why I'm drawn to it. I mean, a car named Pete? Hehe, that's hilarious.

    And I agree with you about the whole point a to b situation -- it's funny how everything can become an extension of one's own ego and persona...

    Anyway, just a short note of appreciation.
    Adieu.
    | Posted on 2009-11-22 00:00:00 | by trinityfinger | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    180545

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    The Promise written by annie0888
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Hollow Points written by RequiemOfDreams
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    To written by SavedDragon
    Linger written by saartha
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    This written by Chelebel
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Giving written by jjd
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Wavelength written by saartha

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry