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    Author: col13x
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    Words: 407
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Like some X file
    The truth
    Is hauntingly
    Out there

    If you search for “Klimactica”
    If you search for “Awake”

    The lies and deceptions
    Which keep you enslaved
    Will just fall away

    If you need an answer
    Find it
    Break the rigmarole
    Break the mold
    Refocus your heart……………

    “Burned by The Sun” from the film “The Ripple Effect”
    sung by Minnie Driver

    So you ever see change
    As the mountain melt under your feet

    Watch the ocean
    As she rises
    Turning everything blue

    Blue as the sky
    Above these fading satellites
    Making their way
    Back to the stars

    To be burned
    Burned by the sun
    Into the void
    Where they begun
    All of them burned
    Burned by the sun
    Into the void
    Where they begun

    Love

    Love is the answer

    How many times
    How many prophets have to tell you
    It’s astounding
    Because they live here
    Don’t you live here to

    And blue is the sky
    Above these fading satellites
    Drifting away
    Back to the stars

    To be burned
    Burned by the sun
    Into the void
    Where they begun
    Oh I am burned
    Burned by the sun
    Into the void
    Where I begun
    Where they begun
    .............................. where they begun
    ..............................................................................................

    It’s just a matter of looking harder
    Looking further
    Than what you are offered

    Definitions made by any planetary awareness
    Will only define
    What is known
    By the experience of that limited planetary consciousness

    Humanity’s perspective of creation
    Is a tiny focus
    Upon itself
    Viewed from its tiny singular planet
    While it simply ignores the rest

    But you
    We
    are so much more than that

    While we look into the very depths of the physical senses
    The isolation we feel grows ever stronger
    It is not inward, but outward
    Out toward the living actual truth
    Creation floats above you
    And is a manifold state

    The stars are not just lights in the sky
    They represent the true face of creation
    They are our home

    We are “Inside” the totality of the Universal being
    And are as inseparable from it,
    As it is From us

    The house of God
    Is all around you
    And inside you

    Not in buildings of stone or wood
    Split a piece of wood
    Lift a stone

    Split an atom

    And you will find “me”




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