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    dots Submission Name: Ontogenesis Germinationdots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 238
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOntogenesis Germinationdots

    As if I am bursting
    There is a flowing
    To a point
    Aching to be made

    How do you capture
    The truth inside your soul
    How to write
    The space within your bones

    Everything is connecting
    Everything I know
    Understanding fills the pool

    But how do I write
    The atoms in my fingertips
    How do I write
    The light

    And as if I am bursting
    Standing on a spreading edge
    To reach a point

    It comes to me
    In sudden flashes of certainty
    Indivisible truth
    Touches eternity

    But how through these hands
    In this skin
    Do I hold the stars

    How do I know
    How do I write
    In solitary black and white
    What this answer really means

    I rise in an expansion
    It touches so vast
    Yet it holds me
    By this expression of touch

    And the Universe opens
    And expands inside my heart
    Still in this mine of tiny mind
    I tap at this keyboard struggling hard to define

    How to hang on to that moment
    And never let go
    How do you capture
    The truth inside your soul

    How do you write
    What is written in your bones
    Everything is connecting
    To the light

    As if I am bursting
    There is a flowing
    To a point
    Aching to be made

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