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    dots Submission Name: Gestalt !dots

    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 277
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsGestalt !dots

    It flows
    An omnipresent identity
    Through every facet
    Expressed in forms infinite

    But always you see
    You give creation a name
    As something outside of you
    Displaced from you

    It flows
    Through every atom, element and molecule
    Ubiquitous through the fields of light
    The plains of dark
    Through consciousness

    Yet continual you divide yourself from it
    Though your senses act as witness
    What is it you perceive
    Through the communication of awareness
    Its is none other then yourselves “in” creation

    It flows
    Energetic, pure and without fault
    Oscillating from yin to yang, Positive to negative, Female to Male
    Bound ever within the circle of life, the circle of love
    Held within the Universal Cosmos

    But always by choice and ego you choose
    Tiny fragments
    Inspecting all the myriad details as if they held the clue
    To existence
    And they do

    But it flows
    In an all-encompassing gestalt of being
    The rapture of the stars
    The primary imperative of unity

    Always you cling to the ethos and edicts of the material
    While your hearts burgeon with continual questions
    While you seek the connection
    And your spirit prods the disturbance
    On the facile dependence of your definitions
    Still it flows
    And always will
    With or without you
    Trying always to remind you
    That above your heads floats the inescapable proof of your home

    Wake up tiny planet
    Open your eyes to the heavens you have so long desired and missed
    As the Earth holds humanity in its cradle
    So the Earth is held in the provenance Universal
    And all you have to do; is realise this

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