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    dots Submission Name: Tears of an Angeldots
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    Author: mugsy
    ASL Info:    68/M/Sooke/ B.C./Can.
    Elite Ratio:    4.1 - 138/106/35
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       "You have to be drunk to understand it...


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    dotsTears of an Angeldots
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    Oh, ethereal flask of whisky,
    Draw me into your euphoric gold,
    In liquid silence---enfold
    A soul that never sleeps
    And mind that never keeps.
    Pour me away---some day,
    That I might rest,
    Not a coffin, or frozen grave,
    Nor ashes to save,
    Just a glass---turned upside down....




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      I don't agree that you have to be drunk to understand this piece Mike,cause in my family when one passes on we always have a glass of ale or what ever there favorite drink was , set aside just for them, an when its time we pour it out upon the groundto wet there lips an let them know they where loved, I liked your poem a lot because it remined me of all the times my family has done us that.keep up the good writes
    adnil
    | Posted on 2009-11-23 00:00:00 | by adnil | [ Reply to This ]


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