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Submission Name:
To you i Pray
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Author:
bubblegumsweety
ASL Info:
16-california-female
Elite Ratio:
1.33 - 3/2/3
Words:
142
Class/Type:
Poetry/Serious
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just something i wrote :)
To you i Pray
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I do not have much of a father
my life was standing still
why even bother
when all they do is kill
Life is harder than it seems
pepople always lableing
the fears and tears every where
why must they care
why must they care
a freak
a goth
a loser
when in truth we are all alone
if gods so high and mighty
why does he stay on his throne and do nothing
teenagers dieing killing them selves
living on this earth called hell
my flaws are who i am i'm only human
my body has been pushed to the limits
raped
beaten
hurt
why would so called go do this to us
his suposidly children
the end is near its death
the truth is we are all damned
Submitted on 2009-11-23 17:23:32
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