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    dots Submission Name: To you i Praydots
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    Author: bubblegumsweety
    ASL Info:    18 -born in Cali -chick
    Elite Ratio:    1.33 - 3/2/3
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       just something i wrote :)


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    dotsTo you i Praydots
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    I do not have much of a father
    my life was standing still
    why even bother
    when all they do is kill

    Life is harder than it seems
    pepople always lableing
    the fears and tears every where
    why must they care
    why must they care

    a freak
    a goth
    a loser

    when in truth we are all alone
    if gods so high and mighty
    why does he stay on his throne and do nothing

    teenagers dieing killing them selves
    living on this earth called hell

    my flaws are who i am i'm only human
    my body has been pushed to the limits

    raped
    beaten
    hurt

    why would so called go do this to us
    his suposidly children
    the end is near its death
    the truth is we are all damned




    Submitted on 2009-11-23 17:23:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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